Daughters of Men


An excerpt of Daughters of Men (c) 2017











Lucian saw a shadow appear near where Zerachiel stood and knew right away that Lucifer had joined them.  Ela shrunk a bit behind him, squeezing his hand.  She had every right to be afraid; the mere presence of the Adversary changed the entire feel of the Holy. Get used to it, Lucian thought to himself.

He had never noticed the heaviness of Hell and, by extension, HellQuarters.  When he had watched Ela in the Hall of Mirrors, he had seen her struggle to breathe until she acclimated to the space; he understood why only now.  The presence of evil sucked the air from the room and even Heaven was no exception.

“Late, as usual,” Gabriel said, the change in his voice immediately recognizable.  The Messenger was now the Voice.

“You know,” Lucifer yawned, looking at Gabriel but avoiding the curtain altogether, “just hanging out.  Lots to do now that I have to resettle one of my HellQuarters.”  His eyes met Lucian’s, and they were black.  There was no pupil, only emptiness.  It made the former Hellion cold in his core.

“I’m scared.”  Ela buried her face in his arm, and he tightened his grip.

When he turned to tell her that he would protect her and to not be afraid, Gabriel’s voice addressed him.  “Step forward and be heard.”

How many times had he heard that before?  How many times had he been in the gallery of angels as one of their own had been offered the chance to plead their case before God passed judgment?  How often had he heard Satan tell the Hellions how he had laughed while the soul of a poor, begging human asked for mercy?  Lucian knew what he was up against.  He also knew that he had nothing that could show more than his actions had over the years; nothing could show who he had been or who he was now more than his last few mortal hours. 

He looked at the archangels he had fought alongside, all watching him.  “Take care of her for me,” he said softly when he looked at Raphael, loosening his grip on Ela’s hand.   The angel lowered his head once in reply, and Lucian saw sadness creep over Raphael’s face.  Even the angels know that I’m in for it, he thought.

“What are you doing?”  Ela’s voice shook as he let her go.

He forced a smile and stepped away, while Raphael placed a protective arm around Ela’s shoulders.  “It’s time.”  Lucian knew that Raphael was doing it as much for Ela’s support as it was to stop her from running after him, and he was grateful.

“No,” she looked back and forth between them, “no, you can’t.  Stop him, Rafi.  Stop him!”

He could hear the panic in her voice, but Lucian turned instead to Michael and unhooked the leather straps that held the sheathed blades to his back.  “When Uriel over there grows up,” he winked at the angel in question, “make sure he gets these.”

Uriel tried not to smile- it was a serious situation after all- as he muttered, “Nothing but smart aleck quips from you still.”

“Why change now?”  Lucian looked back to Michael, whose face held none of the comical notes that the angels of light shared between themselves.

“Don’t do this.”  Michael took the weapons.  “You have a chance to speak.  Take it.”  With his free hand, he took Lucian by the shoulder.  “You can sway this judgment, brother,” he whispered.

Lucian grasped the man’s other shoulder.  “You’ve done more for me than I could have ever asked for.  Like with the paralytic, the four of you cut open the roof of Heaven and lowered me down.  You gave me another chance.  But,” he said with a deep exhale, as he looked first to Ela and then back at his old friend, “my life has spoken for me.  I’m ready to accept the consequences.”  With both pain and understanding in his eyes, Michael dropped his head and hand.